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March 18, 2006

meanderings of my listless mind ...

(Heyy everyone..am in one of my moods again..so bear up wth yet another of my creations :)happy reading ...)


As we turn the pages of our life,
thinkin of the person we are today,
each passin moment, each day goin by,
has sumthin to teach us in its own special way.

People walk into our lives,
many call themselves a friend,
some threaten to go away,
some promise to stay till the end...
Each passin moment,as each day goes by,
teaches us promises can also lie...

Hearts broken n made to mend,
we think of ways to survive the hurt,
once naive enough to believe each "love" to be true,
now convinced its almost always a "flirt"...
Each passin moment, as each day goes by,
teaches us true love can make one cry...

Ppl hurt along the way,
by words spoken n not realised,
we thought of it as nothin thn,
now we know we paid too huge a price...
Each passin moment, as each day goes by,
a void remains, we r left wth a sigh!

A cup of coffee, a rainy day,
nostalgic moods n secrets shared,
friendly banter, hearts pourin out
a stupid mistake of thinkin someone cared...
Each passin moment, as each day goes by,
teaches us memories leave only whn we die !

And life goes on, the lesson never ends,
the journey continues ,we make new friends,
only to learn from the hurt n pain,
we continue to walk again on tht forbidden lane...


(ITS TRUE THEY SAY, "life is a lesson...we learn it only whn we r through"...:))

cheers

23 comments:

SOLEMN SOLILOQUY said...

Food for thought!!

Ekta said...

Awww!
SOOOO true!
EVERY WORD!!...Guess thats what life is about...tonnnes of memories...walking, running, falling and then getting up and walking again!...
As long as we are able to walk again after every fall...we know we'r growing!

Ashish Gupta said...

Gawd! that was awesome!
you are one helluva writer...

I thot you only brainstormed ;)
okok just kidding with you.

Hey seriouslly this is one of those rare kind of writings which I print & preserve....
you are my hero >:D<

Ashish Gupta said...

oh are you into rock? limp bizkit eh?

Arz000n said...

Hearts broken n made to mend,
we think of ways to survive the hurt,
once naive enough to believe each "love" to be true,
now convinced its almost always a "flirt"...
Each passin moment, as each day goes by,
teaches us true love can make one cry...

Oh boy....Im going thru the same phase right now...no wonder I had to take a break from blog :(

And life goes on, the lesson never ends,
the journey continues ,we make new friends,

Its time to make new friends for me....but will those memories of pain n hurt go away....I doubt...

But at this moment...I've lost faith in this word "LOVE". Its been highly misused and just hate when people talk about this...maybe I need sometime to calm down and look at life in a positive way :)

Awesomely written...and yes...."life is a lesson...we learn it only whn we r through"

Greetz!!

Pri said...

@ ss

hmm is it?? try "hajmola" ---sab kuch hajam kar jaye ;p (heehee juss kiddin)

@ ekta
hmm yaa ekta...again i dunno if its worth goin on the same path again knowin tht we r only riskin the fall once more ...but yeah i guess the challenge is to learn frm the mistakes uve comitted before n guess the next time around ul'l atleast know wht "not to do" ...sigh!
reminds me of a fav quote "be like the weed in a storm...bendin but never breakin" ...*smiles*

@ ashish
thanks for appreciatin ashish :)
well..er..im not much into rock...whtever made u think so?? ;p

@ arz000n
well buddy, memories (whethr of hurt or joy) NEVER leave us alone...n any attempt to stay away frm thm is futile...cos the more we try to make thm leave , the more they stick around...
guess the point is not "tryin to get over thm" but instead tryin to "move past thm"...
we make new friends, meet new ppl..yet! some ppl can never be replaced, no matter wht :)
as for true love , i'd rather say "no comments" cos i dunno wht to say n guess im better off this way :) *tryin to tk everythin in a positive way*---thts wht life is all about
cheer up...n hope to see u bak soon in blogsville :)

Ashish Gupta said...

this made me think about rock!

// "Cuz life is a lesson, you’ll learn it when you’re through
"

vIcKy said...

Very True!...Life is like a book...We start a day with a blank page and end up with our memories and experiences for the day on it...These impressions on the page remain there forever and teach us lessons of being good...There are bitter and better experiences and we are here to overcome every single emotion and event that comes before us...At no point of time shud we give up our hopes and beliefs...

@arz00n : Think u shud check my blog out..!!~~!!..Enter Webber world

Keshi said...

**a stupid mistake of thinkin someone cared...

I love that line...so true in many instances in my life...


beautiful one again Pri! Life is a lesson indeed...n how true that we learn it only when we r thru!


Keshi.

Anand said...

Hey,
Well thats what the journey of life is all about!
Thats why they say for life..the journey itself is a destination!

born_in_the_woods said...

Nice one pri.
Each one of us will have similar views on life, a journey,
some happy and sad Nostalgic moments.. :)

As we continue to walk on the forbidden lane,i just hope and wish for all that we make the correct choices the next time!

Pri said...

@ ashish
well ...thts a rather famous statememnt ive quoted thr...so guess the songs not the only place *smiles*...nice lyrics by the way..thanks:)

@ vicky
cheers to tht :) *raises a toast*

@ keshi

i guess we all can relate to tht at one point of time...
n thn we learn...sigh!

*hugz*

@ anand
well said anand...guess its the journey wch counts...n mebe sometimes we miss out the beautiful sights on the way in our crazy search of the "destination"...
sometimes goin wth the flow is the wisest thing to do :)

@ born_in_the_woods

thanks buddy!!...
well as for the right choices, i dunno...sometimes we juss dont dare to make choices again or rather trust makin the rite ones..
But on second thoughts, guess u r rite..shudent lose hope n mebe shud try to believe tht it happens for the best *in strong doubt on this one* :)

Cold Coffee said...

hi pri... its my first visit here.. and i must say i really loved your poem... i don't know what to say because i'm really overwhelmed .. each and every line can open into a whole discussion :D...

u know what they say about friendship.... its not about the time that you spend together... but its about the person who came and never left... :)>.

the only genius around said...

I must say an almost impressive effort...much better than your last effort which was really prose written as poetry..

If there was no hurt, everyone keet their promises, everyone loved till the end...wont this be a perfect world? And perfection is invariably dull and boring...perfection is but one step away from the end...

So enjoy the pain till it lasts, so when you are happy atleast you know was to be sad!! Maybe, then we will learn to value what we have

Anonymous said...

NICE!!!

What's with the poetry mode pri?? :)

chandni said...

oops!!! That was me!!!

Pri said...

@ cold coffee
hey...im flattered...thanks *blush*..
wonderful lines on friendship there...:)
hope u visit "nostalgic moments" again..
tk care

@ the only genius around (sigh!its sad tht u think so...lol!!!)

I wud choose to ignore this comment n not bother to reply..but thn considerin the number of times ul'l be pleadin for me to reply, i thot i juss mite as well...heehee
Well as for ur comments on the poem, thanks neways buddy...muss say u've got a slightly diff (read paranormal) choice than most othrs cos most said the prev one was better...but thn again...thanks for complimentin this one ...;p.
Besides accordin to me, poetry is ot a effort (sigh..as most ppl think), but its juss a stream of thoughts u get in ur mind..so it cud look like prose at times n at times it may rhyme ;p dependin on how i think...so dont go theoritical pal..poems need not always rhyme or for tht matter make sense to everyone ...lol!!
As for the "pain in life" philosophy, i beg to differ on this one...but tht again is a "to each his own" view...:)
I think me knows to value things wthout really needin to know whts it to be sad..whyyy thn???:(
I often dream of a perfect world in wch everyone keeps their promises ,no matter impossible it may seem...n so mebe i keep up to my part of it n expect ppl to do the same..but alas!!some ppl juss find perfection or an attempt in tht direction boring...n so continue to be hurt n hurt *raising an eyebrow*...n thn they r at times labelled "confused" *heehee 100% pun intended* ;p

@ chandni
thanks chandni :D...*grin* aaj kal mood bada shairana rehta hain...thts y the poetry mode..lol!!

Neha said...

very touching piece..friends.. thts the way i feel abt them at times too.When ur together it seems like ull b like this forever and then everyone gets busy with their own lives.. n things just change.. people change, they move on.. it hurts at times..

the only genius around said...

I choose to ignore your diatribe against me considering your advanced age and not so advanced brain.....

Thats it.

Devil with sharpened horns

the_ego_has_landed said...

once naive enough to believe each "love" to be true,
now convinced its almost always a "flirt"...

nice lines:)
thnks for droppin by:)

Cold Coffee said...

hey again pri..

thanks for blogrolling me... :)..
i do agree with you.. poetry is not really about matching words ( i try hard myself to make them match).. its more about a flow of thoughts... cuz anything superimposed spoils everything :P..
you stick to your style.. you have a nice way of putting things across... sooo many thoughts ... and its easy to read and understand... so kudos to your poems... they're made for the world to identify with and enjoy :)..

Princess said...

"Ppl hurt along the way,
by words spoken n not realised,"


Really true and very embarrassing.

Princess said...

"Ppl hurt along the way,
by words spoken n not realised,"


Really true and very embarrassing.