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October 28, 2006

bas kuch yaadein!!


As i was rummaging through the closet of my mind, i happened to find this on one dusty ignored shelf :)
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Intzaar mein kshitij pe ankhein bichaye,
na milta hain kisi ko kabhi kinara..
toote dil ki nakaam ummeedein,
na le paati hain kabhi kisi ka sahara..

kacchi ret ka mahel banakar,
basane chali thi main ek sapna,
per ek thandi hawa ke jhoke ne,
chin liya jo kuch tha apna...

aur kahin is toofan mein,
pyaar ke afsaane beh gaye,
magar shikwa hain toh is baat ka,
ki in labo pe unke taraane reh gaye!

Bahut kuch seekha humne,
rishton ki ehmiyat jaan li,
naadan dil ne aisi chot khaii,
ki shabdon ki bewafai pehchaan li!

khamosh dhadkan ne maan li,
jo barson se na maana tha.
dilojaan se apna jise samajhte the,
woh to hamesha se begaana tha :)

woh kya jaane sacchi mohabbat,
shayad badnaseeb hum nahi...
pyaar jaane wahi jo dard mein aansu roye,
yahan toh pal pal hain nadiyan bahii

hamesha se nikli dua e dost,
ki tumhe khushi mile ,had se pareh,
badle mein,kismat ne kuch aisa kiya,
jo koi dushman ke saath bhi naa kare

Pyaar ki ummed jagakar,
bich raaste haath chuda liya,
har pal ummeed ki kiran jagakar,
doosre hi pal rula diya...

khuda na kare, zindagi ke kisi mod per,
agar mohabbat tujhse rooth jayegi,
tab shayad kahin ek pal ke liye,
tumhe humari yaad satayegi...

kisi roz yeh kahani apni fariyad sunayegi,
chupke se aakar, us purane mausam ki yaad dilayegi...
do din ki is zindagi mein ek ranjish sada rahegi,
kisi mod pe hum mile the, yeh khalish sada dasegi!!!

17 comments:

Shiv said...

choti si is zindagi mein ek ranjish sada rahegi,
kisi mod pe hum mile the, yeh khalish sada dasegi

Nice verse...U wrote it??

Pri said...

@ shiv
thanks dear...n yes, its all mine :)

Tapasya said...

kacchi ret ka mahel banakar,
basane chali thi main ek sapna,
per ek thandi hawa ke jhoke ne,
chin liya jo kuch tha apna


Wonderful lines! Life has this uncanny habit of putting us into situations we are ill-equipped to handle.

Reminds me of one of my very old couplets...

Na jaane log deewarein banate kyu jhijhakte hain
Jahaan deewaar na ho us makaa.n ka kya karuun aakhir

Anonymous said...

Hello Doctor,

That was adorable..Absolutely adorable..but, since am not a native hindi speaker I cudnt get the real meaning of a few lines. but, anyway, gud work!!

So howaya doing??and ur patients??

The Introvert said...

I can only pray for u..

and more for ur patients ;)

chandni said...

loaded!

Doc goes nostalgic again :D

Pri said...

@ tapasya
yess u said it!! life can really be a sadist at times :(
n heyy cool lines there...:)...u write well.keep goin !

@ vicky
thanks a lot pal *blush*
but considerin the fact tht u dint get a few lines, im wonderin if it still wud be as adorable if u were a native at the language :D lol
me's doin fine n so are my patients (hopefully)...:)
whats u upto these days?

@ introvert
gawd! itna boora post tha kya???lol!!!
n yess thanks for the prayers neways...they r always welcome ...
good luck buddy n get back to blogging!!
hope uve given ur "investigating" abilities a break these days :-/

@ chandni
kya kare chand , i live in nostalgia :D...
so coming back to practicality (read present times) is still a problem sumtimes :)

regards.

Ekta said...

arre wah...didnt know u were a poet too...grt piece...wrote it urself?

mystery said...

wow...its damn good...keep rocking..:)

Phoenix said...

lovely poetry..reminded me i havent written anythin for sucha long time now!

btw, i do blog still, at a new address...http://apublicdiary.blogspot.com

Pri said...

@ ekta
heehee thanks ekta, now u know ;p
n yess its original :)

@ mystery
thanks 4 the compliment buddy :)

@ phoenix
thanks ,im honoured...
heyy n its great tht u havent given up blogging yet...quite an addiction isnt it? ;p
will visit ur place soon...tk care pal! :)

Sush said...

that is a great piece of work and I love it through and through..

Ashish Gupta said...

I've read this a couple of times in last week - is it to be taken on face value, just as a verse OR is there something more profound? anything for real :-?

Pri said...

@ sush
thanks, sush *blush* :)

@ ashish
wht do u think ashish???
wud u believe it if i told u it was fictitious? :)...
dont overanalyse it buddy...knowin me,(as lil or as much) whts ur guess??? imaginary or real...?

Keshi said...

aww I dun u'stand Hindi :( but Im sure it's a good one...

Pri u asked me when i'm getting married? LOL Im married already - to my blog. :):)

Huggggggggggz!
Keshi.

Sush said...

you have been tagged. please take it up.

Pri said...

@ keshi
whoaa!! married to ur blog...hmm...sounds cool!! :D
n heyy im sure u understand tht much (read lil) hindi i used...am not a pro at it myself ! :(
tk care

@ sush
heyy juss saw ur tag...sounds interesting...
will tk it up soon...
thanks for tagging me :)