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July 19, 2008

STORYTIME--2

After the huge success of 'story time' i decided that we should have more of these sessions wherein all of us get together and churn up wonderful stories :D
so from now onwards, we will have 'story time' once every month...

for those who arnt aware of what im speaking about, here is the link to our very first creation---- "sometimes too many cooks make an amazing broth"

so heres hoping we will have as much fun as we had the last time around...........


the rules once again----
--->i will start with a line...a random sentence and u guys have to spin a yarn around it...got the picture??
yes its story telling time people :D

--->each of u will have to contribute one line after another...and continue the flow of the story...

--->u can comment however as many number of times as u want but make sure that there shouldent be two 'consecutive' lines contributed by the same person...and also try and restrict each comment to just ONE line of the story to preserve the unpredictability...

--->anyone and everyone (this includes first-timers to 'nostalgic moments' and non-bloggers too) is allowed and requested to contribute...just make sure u go with the flow...

--->the characters can be given names as long as they dont keep changing :p..so make sure u read the comments before u before contributing ur own...new characters can be added...

--->u can make sure of any form of writing--direct, indirect or both...

--->u can write anything u want but please keep in mind not to write anything offensive as it is against the ethics of my blog...also make sure u dont include anything that wud hurt the sentiments of fellow bloggers :)

--->make sure u just put nothing but 'ur line' in the comment section...

--->please try to wrap the story up by wednesday 7pm IST...if not urs truly will be compelled to put up a crappy ending of her imagination(u know how pathetic my stories are and often they dont even have happy endings..so dont say i dint warn u! heehee)

On 23rd july wednesday at exactly 7pm IST, i will collect all the contributions, as they are and in the same particular order from the comment section and post them...and voila!! lo and behold! there will be, OUR VERY OWN PROUD STORY!!...heehee

so gear up and get ready to create the wackiest, funniest, strangest story of all times :D
it could turn out to have tragedy, drama, romance, humour...but the best part is its going to be UNPREDICTABLE!

so here is the line with the destiny to make millions or if not anything, atleast help get that grin on our faces which is worth millions eh? :)

jhanvi smiled at the reflection in the mirror---'perfect' she thought...


cmon now get ur creative juices flowing and carry it further...


cheers till wednesday! :)

48 comments:

Nitin said...

But very next moment it cracked and to her astonishment something cam out of that....

Rambler said...

she had assumed if ever, anything came out of her mirror, it would be her conscience

Stupidosaur said...

But it was the sweepstakes lucky darw coupon the mirror manufacturers had put inside the mirror about 7 long years ago as a part of their marketing campaign, hoping that people would buy and deliberately break their mirrors and then buy and break some more, just to try and win the grand prize!

Vrij said...

But far from the thought of winning any lottery was her mind which was racing quite fast anticipating the meeting with HIM later at noon and she was proud of the fact that her slender sexy figure and pristine beauty would win HIM over!

Stupidosaur said...

But just in the passing, she glanced at the lottery coupon, which...surprise surprise...was saying eactly what was on her mind..
CONGRATULATIONS! YOU HAVE WON HIM!

Solitaire said...

She could not believe her eyes!!
She wondered if someone was playing a prank....

Nitin said...

She read the scratched coupon once again, 'You won Candle nite dinner with Mr. Aaoo Kapoor'

Stupidosaur said...

She read the fineprint....Since Mr. Aaoo Kapur is ugly beyond description, as you might have noticed, we have deliberately arranged for a Candle 'nite'' dinner instead of a candle-light dinner, which has the speciality that none of the candles will be lit.

Solitaire said...

She immediately called her best friend who knew Mr. Aaoo Kapoor's secretary.

Stupidosaur said...

But the best friend was out of earshot.

Solitaire said...

She panicked and decided that she would feign fever. For that, she stuck an onion into her armpit.

Stupidosaur said...

She actually got the fever, fell asleep and started getting hallucinatory dreams where her school chemistry teacher was asking her oral exam questions about negative and positive ions and she was continuously answering 'cation, 'anion' but it turned out the answer inside her teacher's mind was onion!

Anonymous said...

Fearing deadly punishment jhanvi rushed out of the class only to find herself chased by a 'stupid' looking dinosaur that seemed hell bent on scotching any sort of sanity that might exist in jhanvi's world.

Anonymous said...

The Dino Had a 3d web 2.0 Glaze Mirror reflection inside its eye... and jhanvi was soon Mesmerized into those electromagnetic Eyes of dino deep inside.....Jhanvi Smiled at the reflection.. Perfect she thought.... this time... the Eye ( Mirror Refelecting Effect ) isnt cracking anymore to get some kapoors out... instead shes pulled inside the Dinos Eye... and now shes travelling inside the retina... she could feel the Quantum Flames ignited in there.. Jhanvi Thought that this is her last Hours of life ... and got nostalgic to know how her life had been treating her... Jhanvi goes Nostalgic

A germ

RADhika said...

she thought for a moment, "what the hell had happened to me?"

vishvsambyal said...

then she saw him coming

Solitaire said...

He looked as ugly as ever.

Anonymous said...

She was looking at her own Reflection........ but the reflected image had Aura of Male Gender... she was horrified to see her reflection as a male "as ugly as ever".... the reflection was Jhanv(i)ar... the new herself was nicknamed jhanvar...this is how Jhanvi meets Her own Ugly side Jhanvar


A Germ

Solitaire said...

She gave out a loud scream

Anonymous said...

And woke up from her dream to find her astounded mother by her side.

Anonymous said...

Jhanvi was relieved to know that all this was a dream... she got up... kissed her mother... and headed towards kitchen .. she Opened the fridge had some water... sat on the dinning table... and shooked her head for all that was a dream....

Jhanvi then laughed at herself... went to the bathroom she was searching for mouthwash.... while doing so... she noticed herself in the mirror... and then tweaking her tongue out..Jhanvi Smiled at the reflection.. Perfect she thought.... this time... she kept teasing her reflection in the mirror by uttering " Jhanv(i)ar Jhanvar...

She kept saying it... and her voice echoed... Jhanvi jhanvi... The shrilled resonance had her hair raised... and she found that the reflection in the mirror was actually ecohing ... Jhanvar jhanvar.... while she was saying jhanvi jhanvi......


A Germ

D said...

She quelled that voices. It was an act of supreme meditation. But she hadn't forgotten about that date yet and didn't want it to be turning ugly like her dream.

Rakesh said...

She got heart attack and died.And after two decade she born in zimbabwe.Again she could not bear the inflation and got heart attack but survived.

Abhishek Khanna said...

but then she came to read nostalgic moments
and suffered another heart attack!
she couldnt survive this time

Pri said...

but she had to....she had to survive...for rahul..................

Nitin said...

..Rahul her best friend who had run away with Aditi without ....

Anonymous said...

While Reading Nostalgic Moments..... She had a spin in her Mind.... the mind went into reverse actions as if flicker was Flicked from last page to the first page....all the events were flashing her mind in reverse direction
1) surviving heart Attack while reading Nostalgic Moments
2) Being Born In Zimbabwe in a Black Masai Inhabitant
3) Watching her dead body after having a heart attack
4) watching herself in bathroom mirror with voices over
5) Getting up from a dream
In The Dream...
a) Watching her own ugly self with an opposite gender Reflection Nicknamed Jhanvar
b) Inside the Dinos Retina enjoying the horriified Quantum Flames
c) Coming Out of Dinos Retina Watching Dinos Reflecting Eye
d) Fearing deadly punishment jhanvi rushing out of the class
e) Chemistry Teachers Oral Exam
f) Onions Anion Cation
g) Having Fever
h) Calling Best Friend ( Aaoo Kapoors Secretary)Candle nite Dinner
i) Winning Note on a Scratched Coupun
j) cracking of Mirror
k) Beliving that conscience would Come out of her Mirror
l) Jhanvi Smiled at the reflection.. Perfect she thought.... this time
M) Left Withdrawing Support Loksabha decided to be on Floor Nuclear deal takes centre Stage With Mayawati As a Probabale
The Mind kept Spinning in revrse Gear....
\In The Dream...

A Germ

Stupidosaur said...

Suddenly Jhanvi realised that the stars (read: all the above star commentors above, who have made a big discontinuous mess of a story)had messed with her life horribly and she felt this intense desire..to break free..to break free from this story..to break free of this life the stars were governing...in fact, to break free from web 2.0 itself...so she went for the last resort and said,"Parle-G 'Shakti'man, help!!!!!!"

Nitin said...

But no one came .. she screamed one more time ..

Pri said...

and lo and behold...there stood rahul in a brand new 'shaktimaan' avtaar...........

Nitin said...

carrying Aditi, Jhanvi sweet little cat

(Backdrop playing Kabhi kabhi Aditi Zindagi ..)

Pri said...

suddenly the sky is covered with dark clouds....and a bolt of lightening flashes across the sky asif dividing it into two pieces..........as the clock in the livingroom strikes 12...........................

Coco said...

There, lo and behold, outside at her front door are 12 VERY handsome young men waiting for her.

Stupidosaur said...

But it did not matter cos the door was locked, as she and rahul were now vacationing in Honolulu, where rahul had instantly transported her to, with one 'shaktiman swrirl'

Ekta said...

hey girl!
hows u?..long time no news...and am sooo terrible at making stories...the only stories am good at are the ones I give hubby ...hhehe

Anonymous said...

Jhani Is PREGNANT :O ..... While on Vacation at honolulu the news breaks... rahul looses trust as he knows he cant be the one for whom shes got pregnant ... so like millions Of Radiance Bursting out of the Sun.... he asks Jhanvi

" Bol Is Bacchey Ka Baap Kaun Hain"

A Germ

Solitaire said...

Jhaanvi proclaims that she does not know and suspects that it was an alien that impregnated her while she was asleep.

Solitaire said...

Hey Pri..I put up a blurb for Story Time on Warm Fuzzies. :)

Stupidosaur said...

At that moment, Jhanvi so wished that she had the qualities of Ekta...not Kapoor but the one above, who is just good at giving hubby a story, and thats exactly what Jhanvi needed to do

Anonymous said...

Jhanvi... Instead Shouts Back at rahul..screams at him for the first time in the life.... and asks her what is all this going... she says she isnt aware even of... who the mother of child thats forming inside her...

Rahul is terrorised by jhanvis reaction... and he readily remembers what the respected member of parliament "Govinda" had said in his film.... " IT HAPPENS ONLY IN INDIA".....

remembering this... he remembers that he needs to watch DD Live as the Debate is going on in the parliament... he tells jhanvi... that its crucial time.. for her and him to know... who exactly the mom and dad are of the child from whom jhanvi is pregnant and they both decide to track them on DD Live parliament debate... they know Parent to the child must be from These Member of parliament... and they get tuned to Loksabha Floor where Rahul Gandhi was speaking of how Important the Nuclear(Nucleas) is to vidharba....

A Germ.

Stupidosaur said...

But jhanvi is very patriotic, so she says "Isme mere parliament ko beechmein mat lao", just like in a heated argument or fight, some people say "Isme mere baapko beechmein mat la, mere se baat kar"

(Actually she said this because of the sheer boringness of bringing the parliament in this whole story)

Anonymous said...

Jhanvi Reacts to this... and questions

Kya Fark hain mujhmein aur Desh ki parliament

Parliament ko bar bar Vote of confidence prove karna padta hain.. Aur mujhey apni vafadari

Parliament Mein shor hota hain.... aur mujhmein Log Bore hotey hain

Parliament bar bar Marti neta key haath sey.... aur mein heart attck sey

Parliament mein iski topi uskey sar... aur mujhmein uska baccha merey ghar

Rahul... tum hi kaho mein kya karooon.... rahul tumharey papa ney desh ko italian maa di hain..... tum desh ko Zimbabwe ki Dulhaan do... Rahulll Mujhsey Shadi karogey ???????


A Germ

Pri said...

rahul is shocked...whatever happened to his shy friend jhanvi---he wonders....
is it really her??
and then was it love that they shared or was it just friendship----rahul dosent know how to react......

Alok said...
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Pri said...

@ all
ive noticed that most of you here are hell bent on carrying only your idea forward no matter what the others are saying...this is just disrupting the continuity of the story...remember this is a 'story' and not a collection of 'individual chapters' :)
heres requesting u to go with the flow....

@ alok
im sorry but i have to delete that last comment of urs because u have just ignored the continuity and started off with something which isnt the least connected :(

keep writing

Rakesh said...

story comes with flow of individual incidents.

Anonymous said...

Since Rahul has no idea how to react ... so he sings a song.....
u: main to aarti utaaruun re santoshi maata ki - 2
jaya jaya santoshi maata jaya jaya maan - 2

with few juniour artist acrobat-ing and running around.behind rahul and jhanvi.. and virtual jhanvi in various western outfit ( @ of 1 dress per minute and per location) some times in kashmir... sometimes in goa... sometimes in Iraq... and finally in Somalia... where rahul flaunts, flirts and fusses around with jhanvi...... while rahul was dreaming all this... ..There Entered suddenly A......


A Germ

Alok said...

hahaha! 'continuity' do you think so? I wonder what's that ?