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January 02, 2009

...

i want you to be the glow on my face...
i want you to be the stride in my pace...

i want you to be the truth in my lies...
i want you to be the twinkle in my eyes...

i want you to be the love in my heart...
i want you to never from me stay apart...

i want you to be the breeze in my hair...
i want you to be the joy of my share...

i want you to be the nostalgia in my tears...
i want you to be the best of my peers...

i want you to be the moon of my night...
i want you to be the reason of delight...

i want you to be the dimple in my smile...
i want you to be around all the while...

this might sound selfish and maybe thats what u'd see...
but cant help it---i want you to be the best in me!!
:)



[ahh!! what better way than to start the new year with a whiff of romantic poetry in the air to heighten ur curiosity! ;)]

23 comments:

Chriz said...

glow of your face- use a face cream...

stride in your pace - tone your calf muscle

truth in your lies- and dig for the lie in your truth

twinkle in my eyes.. oh thats romantic

breeze in your hair.- ill blow

moon of your night - can i be the star on a no moon day?

if i lose a couple of tooth, ill have dimple for sure..


the last line kicked me out..


enjoyed it..

pri.. that rocked..

happy new year

The Rat... said...

i want u to be a sentence in my poem...

hey u said i want you to be the best in me!! :) not me..

:P u rock Pri...

mayz said...

a beautiful start to d new yr indeed...i wonder whoz inspirin ya

**i want you to be the truth in my lies...
i want you to be the twinkle in my eyes...

my fav lines!!!!

Ankita Agrawal said...

lovely..
:)

Pratz said...

Beautiful ...

Trinaa said...

n thats a masterpiece! :) :) :)

Stupidosaur said...

Wishing for a very Happy You in the new year!

Poems aren't my cup of tea you know. So no comments ;)

Pommes aren't my cup of tea either. Cos they are fruits.

Pri said...

@ chriz
///glow of your face- use a face cream...///
well they say, no face cream can bring about the kinda glow u have when ur in love...not even the 'dove' soap which claims to be a close substitute :D

///stride in your pace - tone your calf muscle///
ahh nothing can match the disoriented yet pompous gait of a person in love :p

///truth in your lies- and dig for the lie in your truth///
there can be truth in my lies but dont doubt the unadulterated truth i speak :-/

///twinkle in my eyes.. oh thats romantic///
thankyou..its a shame u found ONLY this line romantic though..hmpf!!

///breeze in your hair.- ill blow///
or maybe we could get a table-fan..would guarantee a much better effect :p

///moon of your night - can i be the star on a no moon day?///
NO! NO! NO! i want NO eclipse!! *throws a tantrum*

///if i lose a couple of tooth, ill have dimple for sure..///
naah il'l rather have it the easier way :)


///the last line kicked me out..///
thankgod! or else i swear i would *rolling eyes*


///enjoyed it..
pri.. that rocked..///
ahh...at last!! thankyou :D
and wish u a very happy new year too!

@ the rat
thankyou dear..and a sentence in ur poem?? im flattered!! :)

@ mayz
thanks mayank...the inspiration has come from great writers like u who make sure im always in love with 'love'...
so just thought i should try my hand at romantic poetry :)

Pri said...

@ ankita
thanks :)

@ pratz
thankyou :)

@ trinaa
thanks..im flattered :)

@ stupidosaur
///Wishing for a very Happy You in the new year!///
thanks and wish u the same :)

///Poems aren't my cup of tea you know. So no comments ;)
Pommes aren't my cup of tea either. Cos they are fruits.///
LOL! what about pomerians?? u like them? they are dogs btw :P

Dr Roshan R said...

such a lovely post... And I just read in ur comment above, 'poems aren't my cup of tea'.. you kidding.. this is beautiful.
when its heartfelt, its always magical. Thats what I feel anyway

sawan said...

am i jealous?? :P

happy new year dear :)

and may thi year make "him" the best in "you" :)

shruti said...

lifted my spirits and reminded me of someone.lovely poem priyanka!!!!!hope to read more!!!!

Pavi!!!! said...

Very Nice :)

I Walk Alone!!! said...

You bet. You could not have started the new year in any better manner... with love in the air :)

Nice post.

Pri said...

@ dr roshan r
haha...thanks but the statement u read in the above comment was made by 'stupidosaur' not me! i was just quoting his words before replying to them :D
i do pen a lot of poetry a lot of which has been blogged on 'nostalgic moments' too...dunno if im good at it...but yess like u said, i too believe that when the heart feels, the mind writes :)

@ sawan
thankyou...may ur wish come true and may fiction become reality :D
wish u a very happy and successful new year too :)

@ shruti
thanks..im glad u liked it...and im flattered...what better compliment than being able to bring back pleasant memories? :)

@ pavi!!
thanks :)

@ i walk alone!!
thankyou...and wish u a happy new year :)

maverick said...

hey..happy new yr..hope u ve a great yr ahead of u

hitch writer said...

well written... this blogging is throwing up quite a few wonderful poets up !!!!

Rambler said...

I want "you" to be all this
but,
I need "you" to be "you"
more importantly
I realize
I need "you"

:)

Lena said...

awww... that was some sweet romantic poetry here!!! a great way to start a new year :)
made me smile, thanks for that!

Pri said...

@ maverick
heyyy wish u the same buddy...nice to see u..its been really a long time :)

@ hitchwriter
thanks...that compliment sure made my day! :D

@ rambler
woww...now thats romantic!!
beautiful lines..lucky is the girl u'd say that to :)

@ lena
thanks to you..glad it made u smile :)

Arv said...

WOW... super...

looks like am not the only one to do so :)

Have a lovely year mate... take care.. cheers...

Pri said...

@ arv
ofcourse not..we all are romantics at heart :)
u have a great year ahead too!

Vandita said...

i loveddd these lines
"i want you to be the dimple in my smile...
i want you to be around all the while..."
love u pri :)