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May 22, 2009

of lucid dreams and a stubborn reality

gazing aimlessly at the star studded sky,
i connect the silver dots to form a pattern...
and all i can see up there is,
a little less of you and me,
and a little more of us!!


wondering how it could have been,
trying to ignore what should have been...
i find myself struggling to focus on reality,
but all in vain, i slip into an abyss of endless dreams,
only to wake up again and remind myself,
that life is, what it has always been,
a little more of you and me,
and a little less of us!!

31 comments:

Suree said...

good one..

Srivats said...

very well writtern , Take care!

rahul said...

A MILLION DOLLAR REWARD FOR ANYONE WHO TELLS ME WHO THE SECRET "YOU" IN PRI'S POSTS IS :D

Amal Bose said...

that was really good..
keep up the good work!!!

Pratz said...

nice

Pavi!!!! said...

nice...

n a li'l more of us is wat most of us are looking for haan!

Enduring Spirit said...

Sahi hai... You know its a poem , to mere jaise gavar kya bole..but LUCID dreams arent generally supposed to be bad you know that ?

shruti said...

one of your best pri.loved it

Karthik S said...

"a little more of us"...

Wonderful lines...

cheers :-)

Pri said...

@ suree, srivats, amal, pratz and shruti
thanks for the kind words :)

@ rahul
i would suggest you to invest those million dollars carefully instead!
and if u really want to give them away like that, then maybe il'l tell u the answer myself :p

@ pavi!!
i guess so..or maybe, we are looking for the 'us' we see in our dreams! :)

@ enduringspirit
duh! i never said that.
infact dreams are always lucid..its reality which is a blur!! :)
btw welcome back!

Pri said...

@ karthik s
thanks buddy...long time! hows u doing? :)

Dreamcatcher said...

loved it dear!! amazingly written

fan ho gaya aapka

Chronicwriter said...

i wanna write poems too now

chriz

Arv said...

beautiful contrasts :)

well written mate... take care.. cheers...

~_ Prasad _~ said...

ahhh...sweet and romantic...
very well written...!

Anonymous said...

mesmerising words!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
if this is not fiction i can only envy the person for whom it is written :)

Enduring Spirit said...

LOL!

sawan said...

this is beautiful!! luvly!!

darklordreturns said...

Very beautiful and thought provoking... and the clarity..simply amazing!

Mayz said...

sometimes its good not to have a "us"

Pri said...

@ dream catcher
i am flattered..thanks :)

@ chriz
ya sure..why dont u try ur hand at the serious stuff for a change :)

@ arv
thanks...but sometimes these contrasts can be pretty painful too :)

Pri said...

@ prasad
danke! :)

@ anonymous
and i can only wonder why anybody would need to use an anonymous handle to say that :)
thanks neways!

@ enduring spirit
u find that funny?? now im confused :o

@ sawan
thankyou :)

Pri said...

@ darklordreturns
thankyou...not everyone has the patience to see the clarity despite the blur! :)

@ mayz
and sometimes u just cannot manage to convince urself that, no matter how much u try!! :)

Anonymous said...

the one who loves you will want to turn your every dream into reality!
love does not destroy dreams.it destroys the line between reality and dreams

Cяystal said...

Absolutely love the last two lines!..

Good work,Pri !

Blog Boy said...

This is so cool...
Keep up the good work..

Pri said...

@ anonymous
i have to agree with u on this---lucky are those who have found such love! :)

@ crystal
danke!

@ blogboy
thankyou
its been quite a while since u last visited here..hows u doing??

Lena said...

amazing work... really well written.. gives the special strength to the last lines..



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Hemanth Potluri said...

nicely written pri :)..

urs..hemu..

Veens said...

the dream was beautiful :)

lovely and beautifully written :)

loved it :)

Pri said...

@ lena, hemanth and veens
thankyou :)