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October 06, 2014

'Water Girl'


They called her a child of the sea. Even as a baby, she would love the splashing sound of the waves, the sweeping motion of the water as it washed over her feet. She was happiest when her parents took her to the beach. While most children were busy building sand castles and collecting shells, she would spend hours gazing at the sea, appreciating the setting sun, focusing her sight on distant sailing boats, smiling at the ebb and flow of the tidal current. Her friends would fondly call her 'Water Girl'.

As she grew up, her love for the sea translated into songs. She had a beautiful voice and soon enough her talent, like her beauty, was recognized far and wide. They said she had great potential. That night, her parents held a special beach party.
She wore a gorgeous blue dress, blue like the color of the sea, blue like her innocent eyes which matched it. A tiara of fragrant flowers held back her lovely straight hair. There was food and wine. There was song and dance......and amidst all this, she vanished!

Some call it a suicide. Others say it was a high tide and the strong waves swept her away. But only a few believe in what could have actually been...
She was a child of the sea, and the sea called her home!

4 comments:

Vinodini Iyer said...

Wow what lovely imagery! The tragic end also got washed away in the beauty of your words. Loved it :)

Nancy@thethinkinhat said...

I loved the whole set up. Felt like i am sitting right at the beach. Listening to the serene sound of water splashing the shore!

pri said...


Thanks Vinodini. If you like my style of writing, you might want to give my debut novel 'Twists Of Fate' a read :)

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I would love to know what you think of it...




pri said...

Thanks Nancy. That was a beautifully expressed comment! :)